I am pleased to announce The Chocolate Mystery Treat. It is a delightful childrens fantasy story designed specifically to keep readers interested and in suspense. There is also room on this website for readers to post comments on what they think will happen next, what they want to happen, and ways to improve. It is a great way to get young readers not only involved in reading, but involved in the actual development in a story.At least one chapter will be added daily and improved upon continuously throughout the development of a story according to readers posts and comments.
I feel the launch of this new reading experience would be great for family reading time, or simply a bedtime adventure. It has potential to spark imaginations,allow those imaginations to have a voice,and hopefully make a positive impact on the lives of children and their families everywhere.
I will soon be implenting illustrations,a pick your own adventure feature, and a follow along feature for troubled readers in the near future. This has been a long time coming and still a work in progress, so bugs will be worked out as I go along.
If you will, follow me on my quest to create the perfect reading experience for young people at: http://mamasmagicaltrain.blogspot.com/2010/07/chocolate-mystery.html
All positive criticism is and always will be warmly welcomed.
The story is about a 10 year old little girl Sadie Jane, who lives in Rural America.They are not exactly rich but a hardworking family.Sadie Jane's biggest influence throughout the entire story is her mother and she is a warm hearted and inquisitve young lady which sometimes gets her into trouble with her mother. But in this particular story she and her mother set off on a magical adventure together. Their inquisitive and curious nature sends them on a heartwarming adventure that is filled with mystery, magic, suprise, and chocolate...of course.